Signage is an important structural part
our cultural communication network around the world. Signs mean to conveys in
ways and at times human beings physically cannot. In this way, I appreciate our
campus signage project. After seeing--what appeared and felt like--the great
lengths my colleagues went to to produce beautiful and thoughtful redesigns, my
minimalist approach felt much more like a layman's approach. So I set out to
see what I could do to enhance the quality of my own redesign in a visually striking
way.
Back to the Drawing Board
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| Original Redesign |
With my first revision rework, I selected the same picture
that I used for my revision and began playing with some of the poster options
Canva offered. In the spirit of not wanting to do too much, and keeping in mind
the constructive criticism I received in class) I stuck with as little detail
as possible. Although I forgot to include the email address, I think I
captured all the other elements the original flyer was striving for, and
overall, I have a more dynamic looking and feeling flyer, which I can
appreciate. I still felt that it could be doing more. So on to the next
revision rework.
Take
Two

Before
I set about the revision of the revision, I looked for several comic-style
graphics I could play around with. The second one I found I liked because the
captions within it were doing something that I could have only hoped to do
through text on the flyer. I like asymmetry and geometric shapes and two
or three-tone color combinations, so this next poster preset I selected I felt
worked. This revision is pleasing to the eye, and straight to the point, again
fitting my less is more motif.
And
the Winner is…
For the final revision rework, I
actually went back to the original flyer and considered what they were trying
to accomplish through their choices. The two graphics were actually working
together to create a story line. And then it hit me. This is actually what we
are doing in this class. This is the only one of the three reworks where I used
a collage style layout. I cropped the comic into three individual boxes and put
them in order to tell the story. I could, of course, play with this even more,
but this final rework is the first time I felt like I had a real hold on what I
was supposed to be doing with this project.


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